![]() Now for the world building, or the whole plot, really. "All those times that I felt things for Bree, anytime there was even the slightest feeling of affection growing, I'd brushed it aside for Emma" As if this made him such a gentleman, someone who dances in fidelity's good graces. If only his behaviour would at least improve, but as the story progresses he only gets more annoying: thinking he's much better than he is (he's pretty full of himself) making demands when he's trapped in a risky situation with people who would-and want to-kill him (toopid) or saying things like: Still, I expected to come to understand him by the end. Thus it did not come as a shock when I didn't find myself in love with him. I was forewarned from other readers, though, so I knew to expect a douche who hits girls (he punches ones several times in the opening chapter), and is overall an arse. Unfortunately with an insufferable protagonist, the world building and plot were all that this book had left, and after seeing the halfway mark come and go, I realized that in both of these aspects it was beginning to fail miserably-and it didn't stop. It has such a unique premise with a super intriguing world that could have been awesome had it been executed much better. ![]() Such a shame especially that up until almost halfway I would have given this book a good 3 stars. ![]()
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